Your advert is bold and eye catching, Mason. Some suggestions to improve it would be that there are maybe too many colours going on and you might want to think about simplifying the colours or choosing a font that represents something about the product eg a font in graffiti style might suggest the product was urban and "street style".
PRODUCTION = 4/5 = B
I am hugely concerned that you have deleted all the other posts from your blog. The only way they could disappear once they have been published is if you deleted them and this means that I have no way of marking or assessing your GCSE Work. The following posts are now missing from your blog:
* News Corporation Research * Representation of people in the media * Advertising Research * Wayne Rooney Tutorial * Two analysis of professional adverts * Analysis of your own advert * Analysis of two professional film posters * Film Marketing Research * Your Own Film Idea
In order for you to continue on this GCSE course I will be organising some compulsory after school catch up sessions for you to get this work done.
Your advert is bold and eye catching, Mason. Some suggestions to improve it would be that there are maybe too many colours going on and you might want to think about simplifying the colours or choosing a font that represents something about the product eg a font in graffiti style might suggest the product was urban and "street style".
ReplyDeletePRODUCTION = 4/5 = B
I am hugely concerned that you have deleted all the other posts from your blog. The only way they could disappear once they have been published is if you deleted them and this means that I have no way of marking or assessing your GCSE Work. The following posts are now missing from your blog:
* News Corporation Research
* Representation of people in the media
* Advertising Research
* Wayne Rooney Tutorial
* Two analysis of professional adverts
* Analysis of your own advert
* Analysis of two professional film posters
* Film Marketing Research
* Your Own Film Idea
In order for you to continue on this GCSE course I will be organising some compulsory after school catch up sessions for you to get this work done.