Again some good comments but your text boxes have cut off some of your writing, and so it is hard for me to read somethings. Also, make sure you are not just describing things but instead say WHY you did them. For example "I used the colour red for the wording as it is a bold colour which might suggest my headphones are big and bold as well. The colour red is also a masculine colour which suggests my product might be aimed at mainly men".
Again some good comments but your text boxes have cut off some of your writing, and so it is hard for me to read somethings. Also, make sure you are not just describing things but instead say WHY you did them. For example "I used the colour red for the wording as it is a bold colour which might suggest my headphones are big and bold as well. The colour red is also a masculine colour which suggests my product might be aimed at mainly men".
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