You make a few good comments but you need to do the following things to get higher than an E grade: * Keep an eye on your spelling. Use the help sheets I give you to work out ways of writing sentences, and to check the spelling of key words * Make some more in depth comments.. For example "the man's facial expression is serious which suggests that this is a serious hair product that is for cool men". OR "there is some light that looks like it is coming out of the open pot. This makes the wax look special and futuristic so we think it might be so good it is magic."
You make a few good comments but you need to do the following things to get higher than an E grade:
ReplyDelete* Keep an eye on your spelling. Use the help sheets I give you to work out ways of writing sentences, and to check the spelling of key words
* Make some more in depth comments.. For example "the man's facial expression is serious which suggests that this is a serious hair product that is for cool men". OR "there is some light that looks like it is coming out of the open pot. This makes the wax look special and futuristic so we think it might be so good it is magic."
ANALYSIS = 2/10 = E